Wednesday 7 June 2017

Weta poem

Miko’s  poem about tree weta
Tree Weta,
brown and stripy blending in with its surroundings.
Crawling along the branches that populate the forest.
looking for the perfect place To lay its eggs.
Eggs hatch and becomes a young nymph which is yet to explore the world which surrounds it.
Sneaking up on young invertebrates (POUNCE) the weta attacks and has a good feed for the day.
The Hemideina favourite food a fat juicy earthworms and lichens YUM!

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Miko,

    You did well at informing us about the weta but you still made it sound like a poem. From reading this poem it sets an image in my head of what your wrote. Next time you should dis-include the "junk" words. Junk words are words like the, which, then, is.

    Kind regards
    Greanne

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